Living Lies is Out!!
June 17, 2008
It’s the big day, Living Lies is now available! WooHoo! I’m so excited.
Doing whatever it takes could get them both killed.
Twelve years after her sister’s disappearance, Haley Carling spends her days trying to hold what’s left of her family together, running her late father’s shop and caring for her alcoholic mother. Then her sister’s remains are uncovered in the basement of their old home, and fingers start pointing. At the Carlings.
Dean Lawson, long the prime suspect in the Carling girl’s disappearance, is sure he’s got evidence proving who the killer is. He’s determined to clear his name, and he won’t let anything stand in his way. Not even his lingering attraction to Haley.
Haley is just as determined to protect her family from the former town bad boy’s accusations. But now someone is stalking her, and Haley realizes Dean’s the only one she can trust.
With a killer closing in, Dean wonders if he’s made the biggest mistake of his life…a mistake that could cost Haley her life.
Okay, now down to business. In honor of my first release, I’m going to be giving a copy away. Of course, there is a skill testing question…
What does Haley find on her porch when she arrives home? (Big hint, the answer in the excerpt.) Leave your answer in in the comments. I’ll draw names and announce a winner on Friday. Good Luck!!

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Today’s Embarrassing Moment…
June 5, 2008
…brought to you courtesy of NOT ENOUGH SLEEP!
So with Living Lies out in just two weeks, (Holy Cow!!!) I’m going like mad working on promotional stuff that I will not bore you with the details of right now. Also thrown in is the usual writing, rewriting, critting and what not.
So yesterday, to get a better handle on things, I started my day at five and wound up working right through until midnight. When I woke up this morning at seven, I was a little bleary eyed and feeling a little rough. To perk myself up, I decided to wear a new outfit that I bought on the weekend. And I did feel much better in my new jeans and top.
I took DS to school, stood in the playground chatting with the other parents then walked home. That’s when I discovered the long sticker with the width and length printed over and over again still stuck to my jeans. Yes, that’s right, I said width. And to add insult to injury said sticker was stuck to my considerable backside. lol!
Yeah, I rock!
Music: Across the Universe - The Beatles
Mood: Amused

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Digging Deeper
May 29, 2008
So I opted to go back to the beginning of my WIP and fix both plot and character problems. When I reread all that I’d written so far, I realized that if I fixed the character issue the plot issue would fall into place. After all, the two are interwoven. It only makes sense that by digging deeper into my characters, addressing how they would really react to a situation instead of trying to force them into doing what I wanted to move the story forward, the sense of rushing would go.
Now I’m going back and really trying get into my characters’ heads–probably what I should have done in the first place–and what’s happening? Why all the those little pacing quibbles are working themselves out. So this week’s lesson to self is to always, ALWAYS, remember to be true to the character and the story will follow.
Mood: Up
Music: Everybody Knows - Leonard Cohen

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Detours and Write Arounds
May 25, 2008
This week I hit my first snag on the WIP. I’m not terribly worried at this point. These things happen, and fortunately it hasn’t brought the story to a screaming halt. A definate plus. The situation however leaves me with a decision. Do I push on and fix the problem on the rewrite? Or do I stop, go back and fix then move on?
Truth is, I discovered there are two issues that have cropped up. The first, the scenes I wrote last week are leading to a major plot point, but it’s coming up too soon. I need for more information to be revealed before this happens. The second is the romance element has fallen by the wayside while I develop the mystery. Again, this happens. Sometimes I become so fixed on building the story I forget the relationship between the characters and I need to flesh that out some.
This is tricky. I don’t want to spend a great deal of time fixing things further back for fear of losing momentum. At the same time, making the changes now while the ideas are fresh in my head means less work on the rewrite. Hmm, what to do?
I’ll have to deal with the plot point problem immediately, and the write around will be minimal. It’s the fleshing out of the relationship that will be the most work. Hmm. I’ll think on it awhile.
Made a trip to the bookstore last night, and bought three new books because God knows I can’t leave the place empty handed. Today the weather is gorgeous, and what I really want to do is sit in my backyard with a cup of tea (This week’s tea is Bengal Spice, in case anyone cares.) and read one of my new books. What I should be doing is weeding my garden.
So many decisions.
Mood: Good
Music: Strawberry Fields - The Beatles

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The Sound That Said “Meep” and Other Mysteries
May 22, 2008
This morning I’m suffering the effects of lousy night’s sleep. At four a.m. I awoke to a strange sort of intermittent ‘meep’ sound. It’s kind of like a high-pitched squeak. Not terribly loud, but at four in the morning–without any other household noises–it was loud enough to keep me awake.
I’ve managed to track the noise to the front hall, but from there I’m not sure what’s causing it. Maybe the vents or the floors settling. The house is one-hundred-and-thirty-years-old so it makes odd noises all the time, but this ‘meep’ is starting to get on my nerves. I wondered if it could be the battery in the smoke detector starting to die, DH claims he’s sure that’s not it. I remain unconvinced.
Also, in the relm of the unexplained is HellHound’s turquoise back paw. I can’t find anything that he might have gotten into, and whatever turned the fur on his paw that lovely shad of blue/green washed off easily.
Hmm, so many mysteries this morning.
Mood: Perplexed
Music: Cuts Like a Knife, Bryan Adams

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New Website, New Blog
May 20, 2008
Welcome to my new blog!!! And my new website. Pretty cool, huh? I’m so pleased with the overall look. It’s so…me.
My good friend Karen at Swank did an awesome job.
It’s been a while since I last posted so there’s lots of new stuff. First, I’m finished my edits for Living Lies. The excerpt is now available to read. Less than a month until the release date. I’m so excited. Also, I have a revise and resubmit for The Witch’s Stone which I’m hard at work on right now.
The WIP is coming along, though I did back burner it for a few days while I was wrapping up my edits. I’m also wondering what I was thinking setting the story in Wales. Doing so has led to few hassles that will no doubt create more work when I’m rewriting. But the setting worked so well with mystery element. Oh well, I’ll worry about it when I have to.
Okay, because I’ve spent so much time playing with the new website today, I really need to stop now and get some writing done.

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I’m In A Bad Mood Today
April 11, 2008
It’s cold and rainy and miserable here today. The temperature fluctuations this week are wreaking havoc on my sinuses so now I’ve got a brilliant headache, (I’m writing this as I wait for the Advil to kick in) I’m out of coffee cream and one of my favorites got voted off American Idol last night.
I perhaps would not have minded so much if his exit had been the result of a poor performance, but it wasn’t. I do, however, think the nonsensical ramblings from the judges swayed the vote. So I’m officially going to stop watching the show. It’s just too aggravating.
Writing has been going well. Hard at work on a new WIP. I’ve set aside rewrites for Blood and Bone for now as I’ve started edits for Living Lies.
Advil is working. Yay! I think I’ll make a pot of vanilla chai tea (so tasty) turn on the fireplace in the attic, light some candles and let the dark, broody day get me in the mood to continue writing my dark, broody story.
Things are looking up

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April Fools
April 1, 2008
Your April Fool’s Day Prank Should Be
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Wearing a shaving cream hat
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The Best Laid Plans
March 31, 2008
Okay, so when I started Thicker Than Water two weeks ago, I had decided to try doing a little plotting. Gasp! I know shocking. But I suppose after all the rewriting I’ve been doing lately I really wanted a solid first draft so I wouldn’t have as many write-arounds when I went to work on the second.
Now, as I have done plotting before and found that it effectively killed my story, instead of plotting the book from beginning to end. I noted what I felt the turning points would be, jotted down any ideas for various scenes as the popped up in my head (which I would do anyway because since having a child, my memory sucks) and plotted the scenes of the first few chapters. Then, at last, I sat down to write.
At first, I was excited. These scenes played out beautifully on my cue cards. Sadly, as I wrote I just couldn’t feel my characters. AT the end of last week, and about 12,000 words in, I stopped, chucked the the cue cards , opened a new document and started again. And by the time I saved I’d written 1,000 words and, more importantly, I had a sense of my characters.
I have no choice but to accept, no matter how appealing the idea of plotting is to my Virgo brain, it’s not for me. I’m a pantser, an into the mist writer or whatever else they call the type of writer who sits down and writes. In order for me to be able to write the best story I can, I need to let my characters tell it.
Today I hit 3,200, meeting 1,000 word per day goal since I restarted the story. Yay! I’m also back to rewriting Blood & Bone. Added a new scene to chapter 15, tomorrow I’ll complete the second and hopefully by Wednesday I’ll have something to post with my crit group.
Mood: Good
Music: Hey Jude, The Beetles

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Living Lies
March 19, 2008
Don’t have a whole lot of time tonight, but it’s my cover. How cool is that?
Also you can read the blurb here.

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