Comments on: Love at First Sight Blogfest

By: Amalia T

Amalia T — Wed, 17 Feb 2010 02:12:18 +0000

Nice! Great set up for this scene! I kind of feel bad for the poor guy!

By: Livia Blackburne

Livia Blackburne — Tue, 16 Feb 2010 20:59:59 +0000

Lol, awesome.

By: Merissa

Merissa — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 15:49:37 +0000

Wonderful! I loved it. Neither is likely to forget meeting like that! Thanks for posting in the love at first sight blogfest. Your excerpt certainly does qualify!
Merissa

By: Dawn Brown

Dawn Brown — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 04:25:32 +0000

Thanks, Roni. I was debating between this scene and another, but I thought this one was more fun.

I’m glad you liked it Tricia.

Not to worry, Elaine, she gets over it soon enough.

Thanks, Elle. I’m not sure it’s really love at first sight, but I think it’s certainly an interesting start for them both.

Laurel, maintaining the consistency for the dialect was challenging, but I was pleased with the end result. I’m glad you liked it.

By: Laurel

Laurel — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 01:45:09 +0000

I love the uses of dialect, and how that gives a feel for place.

The room mixup is great, and your description of Caid’s reaction…sizzle.

By: elle strauss

elle strauss — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 23:06:28 +0000

Loved this scene! How embarassing and exciting at the same time. And what do you do now?

By: Elaine

Elaine — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 22:37:22 +0000

What a steamy scene.
So easy to see how the mistake happened but poor girl I hope she gets over the shock.
He had better come up with more than a length to enable him to make this up to her!

By: Pat/Tricia O'Brien

Pat/Tricia O'Brien — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 19:48:03 +0000

I like the way you made it quite natural that he would mixup those directions to his room. Marvelous scene.

By: Roni

Roni — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 18:08:07 +0000

lol, I loved this scene. Great choice!